Dissatisfaction

[khurram]

It was meant to be a
smooth summer, speaking with
us of bees and spent coldness.
But we blinked and it's nearly
over. No king of happy
heat, I moan the myth that
was woven for this season.
What is the reason for
summer's scam, dodge
and derision?
As autumn wanders towards
us, we ask summer why
it sang such a brief song.

[albatoss]

I love this one, sometimes we just want the summer to stay, especially where I live where it's cold and snowy almost 5 months a year. Nicely written, keep sharing!

[wordsmith]

Each summers day is a blessing for soon
the autumn will cast it aside
and we regret its passing
much enjoyed
*M*

[candlewitch]

hello,

I really liked this piece, for it reinforces the passage of good times. may I advise that you capture a memory of your summer days, and keep it in your heart? good work!

always, Cat

[CarolynKleefeld]

Ah yes, our moments in the summer sunshine always seem briefer than they should.Beautifully composed and much enjoyed.

[Liquid Bear]

Never been a fan of summer, and neither are you, from what I gather. Still, it's indeed true that time flies when you're having fun. Make the most of these great memories, however fleeting, and remember that summer will be back again to bring about new chances!

Bear