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Michaelwg3
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Rain

Post by Michaelwg3 » September 20th, 2016, 6:41 pm

rain in September
a sweet smell remembered
I just want much more

( does not make sense if you do not live where I do)



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Re: Rain

Post by ObsidianMule » September 21st, 2016, 10:36 am

Petrichor. So Cal petrichor to be exact. Couldn't have it without the Paine.



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Re: Rain

Post by entwife » September 21st, 2016, 11:22 am

rain in september
sweet summer scents
their last hurrah

walking after dark you can really smell them here


"I'd rather learn from one bird how to sing than to teach ten thousand stars how not to dance" e.e. cummings

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Re: Rain

Post by Liquid Bear » September 21st, 2016, 2:35 pm

I love rain and this poem reminded that I want more of it indeed. Beautiful.

Bear


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"I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)

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Re: Rain

Post by Michaelwg3 » September 21st, 2016, 4:54 pm

Thank you all for the comments. Hats off to O Mule! You have given me the precious gift of a new word. Would you explain the Paine? I need to know.



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Re: Rain

Post by ObsidianMule » September 21st, 2016, 6:06 pm

Tropical Depression Paine was responsible from the freakish monsoony September yesterday. We usually see this closer to July August, but the weather's been weird in So Cal.



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Re: Rain

Post by Michaelwg3 » September 21st, 2016, 7:02 pm

Lets hear it for extreme weather (as long its just unexpected rain). Thanks OM.



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