baker

Post by **The ghost** » March 19th, 2017, 11:10 am

icing on the cake
layer by layer
she unveils her self

Post by **aoeclald** » March 20th, 2017, 12:10 pm

This poem can be read so many ways! Love how the title plays in with this; simple, yet so full of interpretation. Great piece!

Thanks for sharing,
Luke

Post by **ObsidianMule** » March 20th, 2017, 4:39 pm

I dig your style, ghost. dressing and undressing at the same time. where's the exalt button?

Post by **godsplat** » March 21st, 2017, 1:37 am

Lovely, excelent!

Post by **astroannie** » March 22nd, 2017, 12:02 am

sweet .... .....

https://soundcloud.com/user-545999561 · Post by **S(OU)LAR** » March 22nd, 2017, 2:21 am

hotter than hot

Post by **The ghost** » March 27th, 2017, 6:50 pm

I love to watch people doing what they love to do.
Many thanks for the encouraging replies - I'm new to this.

Exalt button? What's that?
Sounds like a good thing, O mule, so thank you.

Post by **entwife** » March 28th, 2017, 9:57 am

we used to have an exalt button you could press on the site. kind of an electronic thumbs up.

Post by **Liquid Bear** » March 28th, 2017, 1:54 pm

Quite an enticing and vivid scene captured in such a brief format. Loved it.

Bear

Post by **Ladywildalice** » August 22nd, 2017, 8:27 pm

Just goes to shoe, it isn't the word count that COUNTS, it's the words, chosen and arranged, in just the most perfect manner, that matters. Congrats for this. Much enjoyed.

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