waiting..

[Hazy_]

..and I turn the pages of my book,
the ink still old ,
but the pages fresh and new - awaiting
a drop of the same ink..

[SirDaniel]

old ink tells this reader that the book has been a long time into writing.. fresh pages in front of him says there is still more to write yet the fact he is waiting shows perhaps slowing down.. much enjoyed.

Daniel

[Hazy_]

You got it right Daniel :)

[jwesley]

"...the ink still old." I perceive this to mean quite old and maybe the inkwell has dried up and will never touch the pages again... the thought(s) forever lost.


j.

[jwesley]

"...the ink still old." I perceive this to me quite old and maybe the inkwell has dried up and will never touch the pages again... the "thought(s) forever lost.


j.

[Hazy_]

It can be thought as death and a new beginning too ,indicating circle of life and death where we all are stuck in...Thanks j

[Rosella]

I like these verses, one of my favorite. Like how it written.

[Hazy_]

Thanks Rosella :)

[rupertpupkin]

Wonderful writing and a super life metaphor make this a neat poem. Well done on the spotlight.

[Hazy_]

Thanks rupertpupkin