You think you see
a shadow in me,
a chimera ready to pounce:
you're staring
at your own reflection.
The atoms of your hatred
poisoned the stream
of trust and truth;
my father drank
from your hands.
Half of him died.
You killed it.
You know nothing
of the night
that fills my mouth,
the cold hand
I've been dealt.
None of you care.
I might become
a statue of salt,
yet, I won't be the one
to cast the stone:
the armies of guilt
and remorse
will rape your hypocrisy.
There'll be
no truce.
Time will
send the bill
and
you
will
pay.
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"I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)
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Re: United Snakes
Very good! Very dark! What cold hand have you been dealt? HAMLET
What looked he β frowningly?
HORATIO
A countenance more in sorrow than in anger.
Great Spotlight!
What looked he β frowningly?
HORATIO
A countenance more in sorrow than in anger.
Great Spotlight!
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Re: United Snakes
Thank you so much, xander, and thanks to all who voted for this Spotlight, I'm very happy to have received it once again :)
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Re: United Snakes
This captivated me from the first line to the last. Wonderful write that deserves to be Spotlighted!
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Re: United Snakes
Thank you so much!iwriteugly wrote: βAugust 28th, 2023, 4:05 pmThis captivated me from the first line to the last. Wonderful write that deserves to be Spotlighted!
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"I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)