Bathing in Blue Light (IK)

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Re: Bathing in Blue Light (IK)

Post by Mizuchi » October 26th, 2014, 9:58 am

"I immerse myself in water so hot,
hoping that it will burn every feeling
that I had for you out of my body"

Favourite lines in this painful but beautiful write, although there were many to choose from. The poem captures a very accurate palette of feelings felt after rejection. You mix effective imagery with the mundane act of showering to paint a more recognizable picture. Interesting use of visuals also.



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