Awake in Starlight

[Wynmaiden]

Fellow poets...you floor me. All of you take time out of your day to read a bit of my heart...and it seems to have moved you at least somewhat, which is more than I ever could have asked for. It means so much to me...and is rather unexpected -- not a lot of people before have enjoyed my poetry.
And aye...I did pour my heart out in this one, perhaps more so than some of my others. I am preposterously honoured by your gifts in comment form and encouragement. Thank you, thank you, thank you. *twirls*

[karrie]

Such beautiful writing. Congratulations on the spotlight!

[inflames]

Love the ending couplet. Beautifully done! Congrats on your spotlight! :)

[khurram]

Pitter patter. A nice read. Compact. Loved it.

[musie]

Wynmaiden~I am not sure I have read you before, but I will watch for you from now on...this was truly and extremely creative and imaginative piece with what I felt were great metaphor's for life and how it can be so fleeting...the word behavior and imagery were so endearing making for a truly pleasurable read...There is not doubt as to why this was chosen for the Spotlight...Most deserving....Musie

[Wynmaiden]

Thank you, everyone. I'm touched and honoured by all your kind comments. =)

[Ladywildalice]

Congratulations on the Spotlight. The acknowledgement of your peers, your fellow writers is a flame that ignites that inner glow of satisfaction like nothing else can. Often, it is too bad that many very talented writers get passed over for such an honor. But in your case, the "gods" of TPS were right on. This is a truly beautiful and poignant write that touches every heart that reads it, it is enviable and I just wanted to extend my "pat on the back" along with all the others. Sue

[Wynmaiden]

Thank you so much. I am truly honoured.

[hidekazu inoue]

Wynmaiden, your poem very nice,so i wrote my reply poem for you.

Our heavenly raindrop!
Why don't you strike together with us?
Oh, and eventually our soul of two people
would become one raindrop
disappear and become torrent
but soon becomes the delicious　wine
Being filled to the brim cup
Tomorrow
On this earth
Will make the flowers bloom crimson

[Wynmaiden]

Oh, thank you, thank you very much. =D I am much honoured by your reply poem, which is truly sparkling with loveliness and serene raindrops of beauty.

[Wynmaiden]

Zoey - My utmost thanks for your comment - it really made my day. And that was the mood I was attempting to paint with my words, so I am overjoyed that you found that kind of serene, rainy-day comfort in my poem. :3 Thank you again.