Paint You

[Sasha]

Man, that's suh-weet!!
Well, I think you did paint him accurately!
Your words paint a wonderful, vivid descriptive poem - I love your attention for details and how you matched them with nature imagery, so serene and beautiful!
I truly enjoyed reading this! Brilliant work!

Sash

[Simran]

You made me wish I were a painter who could paint my special one the way you did in your poetry! Many salutes for such a piece.
Pleasure reading it.
Simran :-)

[candlewitch]

hello and welcome to TPS! I agree with what has already been said! This is so lovely:


Last I'll paint your skin like an endless and inviting beach, I'd bask in your warm sands forever.
And its when I feel your familiar touch, like the sand between my toes, that I know I am home.

always, Cat

[Larsen M. Callirhoe]

this is really good. love the spectacular imagery you have put in my mind. so beautifully composed and a treat to read. congrats on the spotlight.

victor

[inflames]

I really know this feeling. It's hard to capture the person you're in love with perfectly- because they're so awesome and amazing. I never feel like I could accurately describe the man I'm in love with. He's so far beyond words.

This is a beautiful piece. Congrats on a well deserved spotlight!

[rupertpupkin]

Beautifully honest and wonderfully poetic description of love, a very deserving spotlight, well done.

[NLCE]

Congrats to you on a wonderful piece
Most deserving spotlight
It was like the picture was
forming right in front of me
as I was reading.
Well done

NLCE

[dornicks]

I wish someone had read this to me while I closed my eyes to take in the full picture. A write of beauty. Congrats on the Spotlight,

dornicks

[everhopeful]

This is a really nice descriptive piece, I think everyone would love to be painted in such a glowing way, not only framing their physical beauty but capturing their intangible qualities with so much affection. I really like how you use nature for so many of your comparisons, it brings not only vivid imagery to the poem, it also adds a very grand feel.
Welcome to TPS and congratulations on the spotlight!

[Sasha]

Yep, a wonderful paint of sugary images! I enjoyed this the first time, and so did this time.
Congratulations on the Spotlight!

Sash

[Eggy]

What can I say? You have sculpted a living being with your words.
It's beautiful.

[allmirth]

Welcome to TPS! Such wonderful imagery and a profound sense of romance and true connection. Congratulations on a well-deserved Spotlight.

Thanks so much for sharing.
Mirthy

[retroview]

My god what a perfectly beautiful read your talent has made me feel like a rookie cant wait to read you more welcome to TPS