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Philip16
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Post by Philip16 » November 7th, 2015, 8:29 am

By inconstant constants
We're blessed
We're cursed

Stars constantly shine
Then implode
Reverse

Blackest of holes,
Lurking, poised,
Snuffing out neighbors,
Light is destroyed.

Beating of hearts
Unseen
Unfelt

Pulsating strength
Unblemished
Can melt

Life-giving cadence,
Unnoticed 'til gone,
Can weaken, erratic,
Erasing a song.

Change is the rule
Birth
Decay

Unbounded ecstasy
Wizened
Dismayed

Seems under our curse
Pulsates a Light,
Providentially pulling
Our soul through the night.


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Re: Constants

Post by anthonycoll » November 7th, 2015, 9:42 am

Phillip: Very thought provoking!!! Without contrast there is no life! However, Ralph Waldo Emerson put an interesting spin on it all when he wrote that in every loss there is gain and in every gain there is a loss! I like to live my life looking for the gold and everybody has some. You really got me thinking with this one. Thanks so very much for sharing. anthony



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Re: Constants

Post by allmirth » November 7th, 2015, 4:40 pm

Change is the only true constant. I like the idea and presentation of light and sound and movement in flux. A strong close with the constant of the force of Providence.

Thanks much for sharing.
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Re: Constants

Post by sparky21737 » November 9th, 2015, 4:56 am

First off I loved the rhyming that you had here, ok I admit I'm a sucker for a good rhyme and yours were just awesome. Anyway back on the actual content which was also amazing I might add. There is always dark where there is light, loss where there is gain it is a constant balance. Thanks for sharing

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Re: Constants

Post by Dew » November 23rd, 2015, 7:31 am

Congratulations on the spotlight!!!!!

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Re: Constants

Post by Kornelia » November 24th, 2015, 9:13 am

What struck me most is that you have seemed to manage to add the sounds and the senses. Life is an ever changing Journey, within and without...
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