Is there any sanity in silence?

[jaievieenrose]

There was a place I once remembered,
among the soft push and pull of time,
that lended its memory to me.
It was a time I had forgotten
the breath of the earth
After the stars had vanished against the light of day
and the birds serenaded the world out of quiet repose.
The flowers clamored and trees sighed
and reminded each other
Night will come again soon.

[dornicks]

I have to remind myself that is sane people who have made today's world the mess it is!!
A good write with a strong underlying message. Thank you for sharing this,

dornicks

[AoR]

Such a quiet piece with a gorgeously penned eloquence. The title makes one think deeper of the meaning behind this subtle read. Very calm, somewhat grim and over all the beauty is striking and touching.

[Ona Sabela]

"After the stars had vanished against the light of day
and the birds serenaded the world out of quiet repose."

I really like this, it's quite a striking turn of phrase.

[BarryC]

fabulous work-deserves the spotlight