Ntwadumela - "he who greets with fire"

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Ntwadumela - "he who greets with fire"

Post by damaso » November 1st, 2016, 7:25 pm

A foolish heart
Returns,
The toothless lion,
Colonized by regret.

But he has found his bite again.
The strength
Of his jaws,
Gathers slowly—
A twinge of fear; before the first test
Of his roar.

Now he is hungry, and the King
Will take back
His prides.



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Post by dwells » November 2nd, 2016, 11:58 am

Prides as the plural form suggests - methinks the king might be a tad greedy? Meanwhile the young lions all play video games. Cheers Damaso - this was a great metaphor for the status quo, and something lost - Dan


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Re: Ntwadumela - "he who greets with fire"

Post by Michaelwg3 » November 2nd, 2016, 7:28 pm

Hunger is a great stimulus for action or poetry. Meat satisfies one type of hunger, only words work for the other. Hunt on!



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Post by A.k.ChaosDream » November 4th, 2016, 5:45 am

i liked this 'return to grace' [imho] motif work you presented for us. also digging the lion personification ...
the teeth ref is especially striking to me....as i had problems with em all my life ...and still have...so i can really get that
great to read you, D, best to you,
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