Nascent..Lanturne [IK]

[tangerinepie]

Nascent

I
III
Child
Earthling
Born of light
Enigmatic
Bairn

[allmirth]

This is so lovely and wonderfully layer. Love the form and the concept of the child as a lanturn.

Thanks so much for sharing.
Mirthy

[Dew]

now that's what I call lampshading the literal interpretation of a poem's theme! LOL...get it? "lampshading"? Heh...sorry. Charmed!

:Dew

[Jim]

Indeed, the young ones belong to God.
I haven't yet been successful in penning a lanturne, but I am trying.

[tmtamish]

This is lovely. The image of a child, whose arrival in this world brings light. And the Apollinairean structure makes it all the more real.

Beautifully done,
T,

[oursummertrees]

All has been said before me, but I want to congratulate you on the spotlight and tell you how much I enjoyed this! Such a great concept. Well penned!

-A.

[tmtamish]

Congratulations Tangie! This is a beautiful and elegant piece to read many, many times!

T.

[shays1]

Good to read you again tangie, congrats on the spot.

[allmirth]

Had to give this a few more reads. Such a lovely execution of a tricky form. Still savoring this, Congratulations on a well-deserved Spotlight.

Thanks so much for sharing.
Mirthy

[SirFleshwound]

Your light shines brighter every day Tangie. Always the one to lead us down new paths. Congratulations. Michael.

[tangerinepie]

I was delighted to find myself here, a wonderful surprise that I cherish..Many thanks for all the generous comments, and amazing support of this poem..Tangie..