A Whisper

[tomthebear]

no order in the dance, no beauty in the romance
I'm just teasing, well oh of course there is reason,

Love those lines... keep writing and thanks for sharing!! Enjoyed!

[dwells]

Some fine internal and soft rhymes BB in a formless form. Guessing you might be the voice of unreason, searching for order in the chaos; characterized in a logical fashion. The eye is the window to the soul, romance is perpetuation of the species / access to the eggs, the dance is Man's glorification in his body, and the music is the joy of being. Beyond those things - I just don't know...Or do I?
That noise is just the wheels turning 'round. Cheers! - Dan

[wordsmith]

sometimes we close our eyes
and see clearer than with them open
this was a thoughful piece because it
made me think and then read it again
with eyes closed ;-)
My Best
Wordsmith

[rupertpupkin]

Lovely write with wonderful and seemingly effortless rhyming. Great job and a well deserved spotlight. Well done.