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Post by The ghost » March 19th, 2017, 11:10 am

icing on the cake
layer by layer
she unveils her self


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Re: baker

Post by aoeclald » March 20th, 2017, 12:10 pm

This poem can be read so many ways! Love how the title plays in with this; simple, yet so full of interpretation. Great piece!

Thanks for sharing,
Luke



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Post by ObsidianMule » March 20th, 2017, 4:39 pm

I dig your style, ghost. dressing and undressing at the same time. where's the exalt button?



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Post by godsplat » March 21st, 2017, 1:37 am

Lovely, excelent!


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Post by astroannie » March 22nd, 2017, 12:02 am

sweet .... .....


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Post by S(OU)LAR » March 22nd, 2017, 2:21 am

hotter than hot



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Re: baker

Post by The ghost » March 27th, 2017, 6:50 pm

I love to watch people doing what they love to do.
Many thanks for the encouraging replies - I'm new to this.

Exalt button? What's that?
Sounds like a good thing, O mule, so thank you.


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Post by entwife » March 28th, 2017, 9:57 am

we used to have an exalt button you could press on the site. kind of an electronic thumbs up.


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Post by Liquid Bear » March 28th, 2017, 1:54 pm

Quite an enticing and vivid scene captured in such a brief format. Loved it.

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Post by Ladywildalice » August 22nd, 2017, 8:27 pm

Just goes to shoe, it isn't the word count that COUNTS, it's the words, chosen and arranged, in just the most perfect manner, that matters. Congrats for this. Much enjoyed.


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