Hypnotized

[interyeti]

Veiny green glass gleams,
In a gravel-pit story,
Ground-borne, spark-set sky

[The ghost]

Hypnotic indeed.
Great word choices

[The ghost]

Hypnotic indeed.
Great word choices

[tangerinepie]

A very vivid, and interesting write.I liked the visuals created by your words..nice..Tangie..

[CarolynKleefeld]

Intriguing and mesmerizing; wonderful use of language and much enjoyed.

[aoeclald]

Perhaps the growth of life after a fire? That's what this makes me think of anyhow, though I could be very wrong. I am a bit biased living in Oregon considering all of the forest fires we've had, so I imagine all of the new green tufts of grass are emerging into this world seeing a spark-set sky, too.

Thanks for sharing,
Luke

[rupertpupkin]

I love to see a haiku gaining a spotlight and this one was such a pleasure to read. Thanks foe sharing it and well done on the spotlight.