Build me an ark

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Build me an ark

Post by Farkas » December 22nd, 2017, 11:44 am

Mother Nature sure seams angry
And when mother is out of sorts
Everyone in the our house is unhappy
Until her foul mood runs its course

Father time left the house
He took the hourglass with him
He’ll be at Michael’s Bar until his angry spouse
Satisfies every nuance and every whim

The Grim Reaper is tending bar
He waits for the deluge to begin
Father time put billions of souls in his jar
Lucifer is drunk with delight, in the basement of the Inn



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Post by Christopher11 » January 25th, 2018, 10:44 pm

I just pray that Mother Nature’s Mastermind doesn’t decide to flick us out of our orbit! Earth is in a good spot for Life to adapt, but there are spaces out there, where things can become cold and lonely.
Very much enjoyed!
David


FAITH

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Post by CarolynKleefeld » January 29th, 2018, 8:35 pm

Creatively, cleverly and imaginatively composed-- much enjoyed.



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Post by miharu » June 6th, 2018, 9:08 pm

Oh my gosh, I loved the last stanza. I really appreciated the different references to the different mythological characters, but for some reason the last stanza really spoke to me.



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Re: Build me an ark

Post by Farkas » June 9th, 2018, 3:44 pm

Hi Everyone

Thanks for reading and leaving such wonderful reviews. I was in a playful mood when I wrote this. I am so glad everyone thus far liked it. :smile:

Farkas :hat:



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Re: Build me an ark

Post by Farkas » November 19th, 2018, 8:22 pm

Hi everyone

Thank you for the honor. :wave:

Farkas :hat:



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Re: Build me an ark

Post by BarryC » November 29th, 2018, 5:58 am

an excellent piece -deserves the spotlight



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