A God in the Making
(for DC)
In your childhood photo,
I see the radiance of your smile,
eyes full of love, regardless
of who was there to receive you.
I recognize in our times together,
the fountain of your extravagance.
Your humor rocked
and rippled through me,
revealing an ecstatic embrace of life
undaunted by the poisonous arrows
that later assailed you.
Yes, a god in the making
you continue to be,
opening up unknown dimensions
with your blaze of shining allure.
I feel you here tonight, my angel,
the fragrance of your love and devotion.
Clearly, we are still exploring new frontiers.
As usual, your navigation is sublime
and I am ever in awe
of your divine guidance.
A God in the Making
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Re: A God in the Making
Carolyn, I am moved by this piece. From the beautiful imagery in the open to the touching moments penned so artistically, I felt this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: A God in the Making
Aren’t we supposedly made in Gods image? If so you can view God sometimes in humanity.
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