Poem I wrote after getting fired today

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JASON
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Re: Poem I wrote after getting fired today

Post by JASON » May 25th, 2018, 7:12 am

I like your ending sentiment -it's happened and now you carry on.
life sure can be unfair sometimes...
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Re: Poem I wrote after getting fired today

Post by Versus » May 25th, 2018, 7:21 am

I am saddened forwhy you lost your job. But, in every evil there is some good. After all, you wrote a poem; and thank You for that.


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Re: Poem I wrote after getting fired today

Post by Versus » May 25th, 2018, 2:07 pm

Critique may be colored by personalities of those who present them. Although critique has certain rules, one reads a poem with his heart. Keep on writing and hope you'll find a new job where you'll be valued as an irreplaceable worker.


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Re: Poem I wrote after getting fired today

Post by Theymakeyouwait » July 28th, 2018, 11:00 am

Some strength to battle through the pain. I wish you well.


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Re: Poem I wrote after getting fired today

Post by rupertpupkin » October 29th, 2018, 12:07 pm

Lovely rhyming and nice tone to this poem. Great message in there too. Well done on the spotlight.


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