Beautiful light
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White light shine in background
red romantic leaves
shadows when wind didn't blows-
clouds turn abstract,
feel depth
below white... of hues-
and shades
imagine abstract art...
when wind blows-
leaves rustle;
eyes closing
of calming day.
red romantic leaves
shadows when wind didn't blows-
clouds turn abstract,
feel depth
below white... of hues-
and shades
imagine abstract art...
when wind blows-
leaves rustle;
eyes closing
of calming day.
New poem: I make a mistake
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Re: Beautiful light
Hi. I think this is a wonderful poem. So calming and so peaceful and uplifting. Very nice poem. Loved it
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Re: Beautiful light
Beautifully and creatively composed, delightful use of language and descriptive imagery-- calming and much enjoyed.
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Re: Beautiful light
Hi I'm happy to know you both enjoy reading poem.
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Re: Beautiful light
Nothing better than a soulfully, refreshing snooze underneath a leafy canopy. Stopping to smell the roses, eh Rosie? Artistically portrayed and cheers my friend! - Dan
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Re: Beautiful light
hi, yeah have to get around nature and fill of it, it keeps me calm. nice to see you here, Dwells!
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Re: Beautiful light
I agree, this is indeed very soothing and relaxing. It does help me to read this kind of poem after a near-overdose of darkness and torment. Great job.
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"I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)
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Re: Beautiful light
Yeah. Nice read. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Beautiful light
thanks for the reviews! everybody deserves relaxing days
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