Held by rapture
Dampened by daily routine
Hopeful of connection
Run through by love
Each to their own
As I see beyond the petty
Crazy life we live and die through
We get to pick our poison
Until we notice what we're drinking
Why should I be so lucky
To realize my own fate
Rapture
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Re: Rapture
The control freak within me wars with my anxiety... Do I want to know what's coming, or just be taken by surprise as fate has her will? I loved the way you addressed these concepts in this piece.
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Re: Rapture
A minimalistic marvel that gives the reader free-rein to personalize SoN. Nicely done, and cheers! - Dan
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Re: Rapture
Concise and thought provoking. A captivating write throughout. Well done on the spotlight for this most deserving piece.