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incognito

Post by The ghost » June 9th, 2019, 5:48 pm

converging with dusk
my inner ghost escapes me
along the river


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Re: incognito

Post by Michaelwg3 » June 9th, 2019, 6:24 pm

Reminds me of fishing for catfish in the Sacramento River, waiting for dark.



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Re: incognito

Post by S(OU)LAR » June 13th, 2019, 7:37 pm

The ghost wrote:
June 9th, 2019, 5:48 pm
converging with dusk
my inner ghost escapes me
along the river
traveling through the universe
till the dawn breaks


I'm not sure what it's about but was somehow inspired.
Enjoyed.



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Re: incognito

Post by The ghost » June 19th, 2019, 6:10 am

Thank you for the replies most appreciated


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Re: incognito

Post by rupertpupkin » July 10th, 2019, 4:34 pm

Nice write and well done on the spotlight. Nice to see a haiku receiving an accolade.


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Re: incognito

Post by Josie » July 18th, 2019, 1:13 pm

I remember being hushed as a child on fishing trips. It was very important not to alarm the fish or you may have to go home empty handed. I appreciated the simplicity of the form.


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Post by soldierpoet » July 29th, 2019, 8:59 am

A great example of how so much can be said in so few words! Well done, and congrats on the spotlight!


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