The best kept secret

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kaushik
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The best kept secret

Post by kaushik » August 22nd, 2019, 9:29 am

A truth which almost came to my lips
but stares outside through my eyes
It demands a few words from you and me at times
In any form that it may come
Shrouded in unspoken words it dances around
But this secret...
Is it just a feeling?
Just like a fragrance...it floats through the air
A fragrance..which leaves the words unspoken
Words that you are aware of..Words that i wish to speak
This secret the entire world already know...why do i still clutch it close to my heart!!



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Re: The best kept secret

Post by Philip16 » August 22nd, 2019, 5:53 pm

I can remember this feeling. Concern that giving voice to the feeling will somehow alter it. Very nicely expressed.


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Re: The best kept secret

Post by rupertpupkin » June 12th, 2020, 5:57 pm

A wonderfully poignant write. Insightful and delightful. Well done on the spotlight


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Re: The best kept secret

Post by S(OU)LAR » June 12th, 2020, 8:03 pm

Feels like a drop of water in the palm of the hand.



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Re: The best kept secret

Post by Chelle » June 19th, 2020, 5:34 pm

so much angst. we all have our secrets but sometimes we don't realize just how noticeable we are being.


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