are your eyes divine blue
falling from heaven
The divine blue
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Re: The divine blue
Love this! I have blue eyes, so maybe I am thinking with my eyes as to how beautiful it is... Honestly though, such a fresh and unique way to capture the blue eyes without the usual cliches! Much enjoyed! -LMB xoxo
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Re: The divine blue
Excellently written.
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Re: The divine blue
Though it can be interpreted different ways the way I read it as the rain is falling from the clouds, God pouring down his love and tears on us.
I can picture it as "literal" eyes as well...
Beautiful image!
~TIMOTHY~
I can picture it as "literal" eyes as well...
Beautiful image!
~TIMOTHY~
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Re: The divine blue
Bewildering beauty in these lines...left me amused....excellent read :-)
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Re: The divine blue
Most beautifully expressed; delightful use of succinct language and much enjoyed.
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Re: The divine blue
Beautiful write. I love it. Keep up the great work!
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Re: The divine blue
very nice work, a miriad of meanings
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Re: The divine blue
I really love this. Very nice imagery and imagination. Well done! :)
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Re: The divine blue
Much enjoyed. Made me wanna look at the clear blue sky. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The divine blue
thanks, this makes me feel special with my blue eyes, a wonderful compliment to poetry you have given us
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Re: The divine blue
Simple yet full of wonderful imagery. A delightful piece that truly deserves this spotlight award. Nice write!
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Re: The divine blue
good use of form. I myself have blue eyes and would have loved someone to give me such a compliment. :)
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