The Sanctuary (tribute) (Realms of Love XIII)

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Re: The Sanctuary (tribute) (Realms of Love XIII)

Post by JingleBelle » June 8th, 2012, 8:20 pm

I am impressed how you can weave meter, rhyme, and so many people effortlessly into such a beautiful fantasy piece. I am in awe, Jah. This is the first I've read of you, but certainly not the last.


Eventually, I ventured into free verse.

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Re: The Sanctuary (tribute) (Realms of Love XIII)

Post by VeiledPrincess » June 9th, 2012, 1:43 am

Aww thank you JAh. This fantasy fun was so sweet and such a honor
to be in and about. Thank you again but you know tell G n D to save
some torment for me.
LOl. :) <3


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Re: The Sanctuary (tribute) (Realms of Love XIII)

Post by Philip16 » September 1st, 2012, 8:01 pm

Incredibly clever composition and a wonderful tribute to the TPS family.
A joy to read.
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Re: The Sanctuary (tribute) (Realms of Love XIII)

Post by JingleBelle » September 2nd, 2012, 5:34 pm

Jeez, Jah, this is impressive. It is beautifully written and you squeezed people in I did not even know were there. I had to go through a couple times to try to place everyone.


Eventually, I ventured into free verse.

New Poem: For You

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