Lapse.

[Stephanie]

Hi inflames, i can tell you had fun with this, it is an engaging piece well done on the spotlight

[bupaje]

Haha (laugh of delight) I have to say brilliantly executed. You manage to convey masterfully with word and structure. I felt the

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[dornicks]

There's no harm in a bit of insanity,now and then. Like the way you presented this. Good luck,

dornicks

[nortan223]

I enjoyed the original posting of this, so I'm delighted that you've had it elevated to the Spotlight.
Congratulations !!
---Norman--

[tangerinepie]

Inflames..super clever and what a great way to have some fun writing.Many smiles on reading this, so glad I found it..Still smiling..T..

[Jahaliel]

So wonderful. Really loved each word. You're amazingly talented and very deserving of the spotlight

[everhopeful]

Haha, so pleased to see this one in the spotlight, it manages to hold a bit of quirkiness yet is so measured and precise with it. The juxtaposition of the two makes for a delightful contrast within a visually engaging poem, and is another wonderful example of many of your enviable poetic qualities.
Congratulations on the spotlight!

[Sasha]

I think all your work is a Spotlight-project, and this is one of the many poems that deserves the appreciation!
Excellent work, and Congrats! x

Sash

[inflames]

Thanks, everyone! You make me blush.

Sasha... you're a doll; I have crap work too, haha.

[candlewitch]

hello!

wonderful play with formatting! Loved the clever presentation of self expression. Crazy like a fox! Nice to meet you!

always, Cat (Candlewitch)

[bushpoet]

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