The State of Play

[Danielle1982]

A great topic of focus here. We are all guilty of mischief in our lives but what really is wrong doing in relation to what religion says is wrong? Your title for this piece made me chuckle. Are you talking about playful mischief or something truly wrong? Either way what we find to be playful the church certainly would label sin so I'm sure the angels will keep weeping. Nice job with this.

[Sasha]

Congrats on the deserved Spotlight!
This is was written gracefully, as the message was hidden behind ironic sentences cleverly, that hits the reader after thorough read.

Sash

[Josie]

Congratulations on the spotlight. It was interesting for me to see all those feminine endings and four major stresses per line. I see your name and I think iambic pentameter, but after all you entitled it "The State of Play" and you delivered. The message was spot on.

[E.S.]

How brutal and scary.....much enjoyed.