Battle Symbol.

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Patdolan83
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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by Patdolan83 » December 17th, 2012, 11:00 pm

I love it when I come across something different....brilliant my friend


"I wouldn’t want you to want
To be wanted by me
I wouldn’t want you to worry
That You'd be drowned within my sea
I only wanted to be wonderful
And wonderful is true
In truth I only really wanted
To be wanted by you"

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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by Hem » December 18th, 2012, 2:50 pm

Brilliance. Perhaps a little over my head but very inventive and enjoyable. Congrats!


Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement. ~ Christopher Fry
Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary. ~ Kahlil Gibran

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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by Sasha » December 18th, 2012, 3:34 pm

Woah! a stellar package of exceptional work!
*sighs*, bookmarked, and Congratulations on the much deserved Spotlight, Flamey! x

Sash



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by up2quark » December 20th, 2012, 1:09 am

Definately a unique piece of gorgoues writing.



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by SwingingPistol » December 21st, 2012, 1:38 am

So happy to see in this Spotlight! Definitely worthy! Congrats!



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by Aurellionsnew » December 22nd, 2012, 4:53 am

Wow, its like art squared! Words and form combined. Love it. Keep it up!

Aurellion :alien:



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by SirDaniel » December 22nd, 2012, 8:34 am

I believe the entire concept of this touches on how we, as a society, use symbols to say things words can not do justice too.. for example, you end with a cross which beyond the religious aspect, a cross shows two directions that intersect for the briefest of seconds.. how can we describe that in words?

Much enjoyed, the formatting looked like a real pain in the @ss,,

best wishes,

~ Daniel



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by wendellgee » December 23rd, 2012, 1:59 am

The playfulness was great. Good write.



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by musie » December 23rd, 2012, 8:38 am

This most definitely should have made the Spotlight and I'm glad to see that it did...most deserving and Congratulation's!


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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by Josie » December 23rd, 2012, 7:49 pm

This was quite an adventure to read. I did have to work on getting it large enough for my vision, but the twisting and turning was great fun.


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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by inflames » December 24th, 2012, 11:42 am

Thanks all! :) all your lovely comments are appreciated!



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Re: Battle Symbol.

Post by ladylilith » December 24th, 2012, 12:31 pm

I'm so glad this was spotlighted!!!!!

I also agree with Josie.. It is an adventure to read this. You have such an enviable scope when it comes to language as a tool.

Congrats!!

Lil
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