A truly ugly promise.
Break the chains of a cruel death.
Great write.
Ugly Promise.
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Ladywindnz
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The first study for the poet is knowledge of himself. One must be a seer. The poet becomes a seer through a long, immense & reasoned derangement of all the senses. All shapes of love, suffering, madness. He searches himself, he exhausts all poisons, to keep only the quintessences..Arthur Rimbaud
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the quiet poet
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Sasha
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Re: Ugly Promise.
Such a powerful little piece!
I love the atmosphere you bring the reader to indulge in at first, then it changes cruelly with every line and every drop of effective word to hit the reader at the last line.
Brilliant work, flux! Congrats on the deserved Spotlight!
Sash
I love the atmosphere you bring the reader to indulge in at first, then it changes cruelly with every line and every drop of effective word to hit the reader at the last line.
Brilliant work, flux! Congrats on the deserved Spotlight!
Sash