The Delta Sway

Post by **inflames** » February 6th, 2013, 2:47 pm

I like the energy in this piece. Some of the lines have a sway to them themselves, which is awesome. I quite like this. Congrats on your spotlight.

Post by **dornicks** » February 7th, 2013, 3:29 pm

After all the positive comments, I can only say this poem is where it was meant to be. Being Irish didn't help appreciate it to it's full.

Dornicks

Post by **Afishamongmany** » February 8th, 2013, 1:30 pm

Yes C2W a good read, evocative, atmospheric. Old jazz and blues are my door into this poem. And thanks for the new vocabulary, "original gangster", don't know if I'll ever use it but good to know it.
Cheers
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Post by **ladylilith** » February 9th, 2013, 5:01 am

The Delta Sway indeed! Did I miss this the first time? How annoying! Ah well, I'm hella glad I got to read it now. I was particularly won over by the ending, but I suppose that wouldn't have had half the impact if you hadn't have built to that point with such a winderfully alluring diction and such an electric way with words. I love it! A wholehearted congratulations on the Spotlight!! Very much deserved.

Lily^^

Post by **BarryC** » February 9th, 2013, 11:28 am

this is kinetic-well done

Post by **Dew** » February 10th, 2013, 8:32 am

So pleased to see this spotlighted! Ditto my first comment on it and everyone else's! Congrats! - dew

Post by **Jim** » February 10th, 2013, 10:07 am

luv it luv it luv it!
I have roots down that way
bookmarked for future enjoyment

glad I caught this here

peace and much love dear friend

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