An archive containing past featured spotlight works, what we consider, some of the best works on TPS. Feel free to leave comments.
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Mr Goth - Regular Member
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Sky'fire Queen
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by Mr Goth » May 8th, 2012, 12:33 am
Sky'fire Queen
Exerting feelings overcame me
A pearly glow landed on my finger tips
in the midnight sky, what fell from her lips
poetry, a doorway into infinite turning gears
Distant rainbows orbiting stellar suns
where her throne sits
slipping into unknown regions
Colliding beauty, grace,
Emerging a fiery sapphire
Spells asunder, kiss's our imagination
trailing a comets tail
soft smiles, as her pen moves in the violet air
with a flick of a wand, her worlds begin
Fairy silk, shaped into galactic tapestries
weaving all walks of life into her magical kingdom
O, all come and stare into the very fabrics
of what makes Jahaliel Our TPS Fantasy Queen
“ I am the voice of Never-Never- land the innocence,
the dreams of every man” - NightWish
thank you Jah, for the encouragement and friendship
and being there through thick and thin you're a great friend
I could never ask for better.
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Jahaliel
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by Jahaliel » May 8th, 2012, 7:21 am
This is beautiful. I love the way you capture the very essence of fantasy dreamer. Also I love the quote, it fits perfectly. Words can't express how grateful and awed I am. Thankyou.
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QuietAstronomer
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by QuietAstronomer » May 8th, 2012, 11:32 am
Always good to read you, brother.
Excellent write, this.
Thanks for sharing and glad to see you here!!
QA
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Chelle
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by Chelle » May 10th, 2012, 12:21 am
Ahhh look you wrote a poem about Jah. Well written of course and I felt like I was in the sky riding along and then pulled out to find myself behind a pen. And yet the two fit together :)
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by ladymaybebaby » March 11th, 2013, 10:20 am
Beautiful work! I love the tone and the delicate feel this has to it... and I love the nod to the fantasy queen! I agree she is a beautiful all of the way around! Congrats on the spotlight pick, it is much deserved! I'm sorry I missed this one the first time around, thank goodness for second chances!
-LMB
xoxo
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tangerinepie
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by tangerinepie » March 11th, 2013, 4:54 pm
A very elegant and stellar poem.Ties everything together with Jahliel's mastery of the fantasy and beyond.You created with your own words a glowing poem, and I am delighted to see it spotlighted..Gorgeous..Tangie..
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by Whiskurz » March 11th, 2013, 11:32 pm
Congrats on the spotlight my friend.......Whisk
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by whubbard7 » March 11th, 2013, 11:52 pm
Very interesting and well deserved spotlight. Your words flowed so well that after I finished I think I just stared at the screen blankly, not even realizing it was over for a while. Nice work, like the qoute!
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Jahaliel
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by Jahaliel » March 12th, 2013, 2:34 am
I still have the second stanza of this as my email sig. All I can do now is echo my above comment and just add congrat on the Spotlight. *love n hugs*
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I loved you then, I love you still though we are shadows of our former glory
Though they try to kill us off, we are a never-ending story
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Patdolan83
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by Patdolan83 » March 12th, 2013, 10:53 am
A deserved spotlight...very nicely penned
"I wouldn’t want you to want
To be wanted by me
I wouldn’t want you to worry
That You'd be drowned within my sea
I only wanted to be wonderful
And wonderful is true
In truth I only really wanted
To be wanted by you"
D Rice
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by inflames » March 12th, 2013, 4:23 pm
Lovely quote from Nightwish and well suited for Jah. This is a beautiful post and well suited to the spotlight! Well done!
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Ladywildalice
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by Ladywildalice » March 13th, 2013, 1:20 pm
Congratulations on the Spotlight for this well deserving write. Much enjoyed your way with words, as always, and can see why this was chosen.
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by Sasha » March 16th, 2013, 2:42 pm
Oh, that's beautiful!
Love the imagery here and I really appreciate you writing this. Jah is the best and you words were a wonderful dedication.
Congratulations on the deserved Spotlight!
Sash
