I have been the captain
Of many shipwrecked vessels
Accompanied by the oddest people I know.
Wandering
But not lost.
Marooned on familiar lands
Full of desperate hopes and melodies
Continuing onwards
towards the horizon;
Homeward bound.
The kind-of Pirate Life
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
love this! full of hidden wisdom! thanks for sharing!
I breathe. I love. I praise. I laugh. I mourn. I fight. I write. I share. I smile. I continue.
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
Loved the title of this poem, it grabbed my interest.
This poem has a relaxed feel, your thoughts come across very naturally and there is an undercurrent of humour.
This poem has a relaxed feel, your thoughts come across very naturally and there is an undercurrent of humour.
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
I really like the vein of this piece. I like to think of myself as a pirate sometimes.. Heh heh. YARRR!
A well worded piece of poetry that offers a wise and smooth perspective. Really like this. Short but by no means lacking!
Lily^^
A well worded piece of poetry that offers a wise and smooth perspective. Really like this. Short but by no means lacking!
Lily^^
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
Lovely poem full of wonderful lines. Well done on a most deserved spotlight
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
Home is where the heart is, like the previous poster, yes its a gravitational pull, but in my mind and heart, it is the spirit of God getting us home. Thank you.
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Re: The kind-of Pirate Life
Fun little poem, and I love the way this can be applied to so many contexts. Congrats on the spotlight!
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