Mick - as impressed by this poem second time around, and thrilled to see it in the spotlight!
Status update aside, even though I knew what to expect from this one, and not needing the eureka moment in line four, it was still a wonderful moment to re-experience. While my first read of this was all about appreciating the word play, this time around I could also savour the sound of your words.
Excellent work, congratulations on the spotlight!
Love as 8
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Josie
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Re: Love as 8
Now, why didn't I think of that! This was a very clever image for love and easy to recall by remembering the number eight. Congratulations on the spotlight recognition.
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lonelystar53
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Re: Love as 8
Congrats! And clever poem. This is one my logic driven brother will love.
You are a flower. Rarely found and beautiful beyond measure, you are also vain and selfish. You often allow your pride to get in the way of your true feelings. Despite this, you are truly loved and treasured.