Our Endless Skies

An archive containing past featured spotlight works, what we consider, some of the best works on TPS. Feel free to leave comments.
inflames
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Re: Our Endless Skies

Post by inflames » April 18th, 2013, 1:41 pm

Love the ending. Really makes me want to float away with someone special. Awesome work with this piece.

Congrats on your spotlight, Dan.


"I don't see novels ending with any real sense of closure."
– Michael Ondaatje


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everhopeful
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Re: Our Endless Skies

Post by everhopeful » April 18th, 2013, 4:16 pm

A pleasure to re-read this one, and while I'd find it hard to add anything new to my previous comment I have to say that it was a delightful piece which is a most worthy spotlight, congratulations!



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Re: Our Endless Skies

Post by gooseberry » April 20th, 2013, 1:31 pm

I can only repeat what others have already said.A masterpiece woven expertly with the gentle and whistful words of a true poet.Magnificent.


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SirFleshwound
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Re: Our Endless Skies

Post by SirFleshwound » April 21st, 2013, 3:48 am

A picture of serenity, beautiful. Your words are tinged with a mellow mood that actually calms the heart. Congratulation on the spotlight sir!



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Re: Our Endless Skies

Post by ladylynnmary » July 20th, 2013, 12:11 pm

Dearest Daniel, oh this really took hold of my heart. So romantic and shows such a great love shared by
two. Your beautiful words describe this romance so well. Thank you for sharing this.

Much Love,
Lynn



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