Kiss My... (mature)

[YoursTrulyZsa]

See the lace upon my hips
That's where I want to feel your lips

Brush my stomach with your hand
While behind me you now stand

Now slide your hands down below
Lightly feeling as you go

Breaths escape more rapidly
Eyes closed now in ecstasy

Back now pressed against the wall
I want you to explore it all

Legs begin to tremble now
Moving me onto the couch

Bodies now mesh into one
Hours later all is done


*edited from its original wording to fit TPS standards.

[candlewitch]

Dear Zsa Zsa,

I much enjoyed your journey into physical love. I love the easy flow of this piece. Well done!

always, Cat

[QuietAstronomer]

Ermmmmm,,,blushing......mylady...quite the ,um, well, exciting piece.


Gulp.


QA

[YoursTrulyZsa]

Sometimes is not a sprint my dear...sometimes its a leisurely pace!

JaJa

[YoursTrulyZsa]

You are all so sweet. M-GMA, though I have a few faithful readers of my smut, no one has offered them to that position, so I guess it's yours! ;)

cat- thanks sweetie...good to see you lately :hug:

QA- need a moment?

Love to you all!!

Zsa

[Zojourn]

A very sultry and exquisite (w)rite! I shamefully must admit that I fervently enjoyed each and every image in succession. I'd be lying if I said I didn't. I think I'll ask my Lady to wear lace tonight!

[YoursTrulyZsa]

Love that...I'm sure if you do just as above, she will enjoy you immensely! Good luck ;)
Woohoo!!!

Zsa

[allmirth]

All I can say friend is I wish my boyfriend was not working so far away right now. Most enjoyable!

Thanks for sharing.
Mirthy

[moe]

Not fair, not fair I just a while ago came in from the heat and was duly humidified anyway tro make a long story... I finally got cooled down and now I'm sweating again. Dang you Zsa zsa!

[YoursTrulyZsa]

Whoopsy moe!!! My bad...makin the TPS boys sweat the last 2 days apparently!!!

Lucky you guys!!
Zsa

[AliMariesDad]

Whoa! Had to wipe the sweat off my forehead after reading this one, Zsa! Such vivid imagery! You are a genius with words.
Hmmmm, think I'm going to run home to my wife now.
AMD

[Alan]

really passionate and descriptive without being "crude"

nice

[ladymaybebaby]

Hours later???? what's up with that girlfriend? You must still be rocking that contest.... No response from my fearless leader on this one?

-R
xoxo

[YoursTrulyZsa]

AMD-go get her!!! ;)

Alan-thank you....I tried the classy sensual style ;)

LMB-sweetie...like I said...not about a race I've missed you on LPS!

[jeremyf]

I read it, I read it LMB. I have just had a hard time typing through this dark red blush in my cheeks, hahaha. You certainly delivered the steam Zsa, but as said before, it was delivered on a classy level that allowed one's imagination to do all the heavy lifting. Scintillating write.

[YoursTrulyZsa]

Thanks J...glad you enjoyed ;) guess I'm 'in a mood'!

Zsa

[the quiet poet]

As everyone else has already mentioned, this piece obviously did very well in bringing up very passionate feelings. what I love the most about your work is how lovely you make it sound. How smooth and perfect. Can't wait to see more :)

[YoursTrulyZsa]

I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Thank you all for your comments on this and the already removed 'senses'.

Stay well and I hope to back with something else's for your minds soon ;)

Zsa

[moe]

well the "blue noses" won't get my copy

[YoursTrulyZsa]

Love ya moe!! Thanks for the smile!