Time to kiss and say goodbye
Wipe the tear from your eye
Step aboard the train and wave
Take the memory and save,
This special moment in your mind
When I was yours and you were mine
As the wheels turn on the track
We know there is no turning back
Take this broken heart…...... wherever you go
I need the world to see.... I need it to know
that I'm standing here surrounded by pain
where no shadows fall here in the rain
silver rain begins to fall
My lonely heart I hear it call
It asks me why you left today
Even though I asked you please to stay
The pain was there for all to see
That you no longer wanted me
And as you disappeared from sight
I turned my back upon the night
Oh as you dissapeared from sight
I turned my back upon the night.......
The old clock ticks upon the wall
I want to sleep so dreams can call
But in my mind I just replay
That last farewell you said today
I’ll close my eyes forget the tears
We were together through the years
I see you laughing in the rain
As I surrender to my pain
So Take this broken heart.......... wherever you go
you turned your back on me.... but it doesn’t show
that I'm standing still, surrounded by pain
where no shadows fall here in the rain...........
Oh where no shadows fall here in the rain
Where no shadows fall
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Re: Where no shadows fall
I still like more songs about letting go than about love, althoght it is always chliche, you gave it really good melody and the song simply flows. Very well penned!
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Re: Where no shadows fall
I really like what you have done here,good lyrics that flow well , the theme and the hint of a tune. Thank you for sharing this,
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Re: Where no shadows fall
Love the title and the song. I have nothing but praise for this heartbreak song. Well done! Faith
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Re: Where no shadows fall
Greeting GMC:
A true heart breaker. A lot of people can relate to "Where No Shadows Fall" Your song is well written and was emotionally absorbed. I felt every word. Thanks for sharing.
A true heart breaker. A lot of people can relate to "Where No Shadows Fall" Your song is well written and was emotionally absorbed. I felt every word. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: Where no shadows fall
a melodic and sad piece. Song like and ethereal.
Well written.
Well written.
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Re: Where no shadows fall
"no shadows fall here in the rain"...that was absolutely beautiful drama...congrats on a spot well deserved! - dew
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Re: Where no shadows fall
Your song like lyrics touched on the pain of a departing love, a time I know I have experienced. Congratulations on the TPS Spotlight. A favorite part that repeats for me:
Step aboard the train and wave
Take the memory and save,
This special moment in your mind
Step aboard the train and wave
Take the memory and save,
This special moment in your mind