When I wake up in the morning,
it isn’t you that’s on my mind.
It’s the place you lived inside my chest,
but that’s over and besides,
You weren’t the best of visitors
and I wasn’t the best host.
Nothing really could’ve happened
that wouldn’t hurt us both.
Moonlight lady look at me,
I’ve left your wayward cage.
There’s something I’m not telling you
and there’s something you won’t say.
Don’t ask me why or say goodbye,
I don’t think that we should speak.
It’s not that I don’t miss you,
just not the way you think.
I know the times are changing,
though you likely aren’t upset.
Just longing for the feeling
of some stranger that you’ve met.
The one way train you’re riding now
is different than before
Just don’t blame the bad things
on your walking out the door.
The flowers of the city,
were once scaling the walls,
Are over and exhausted,
for we didn’t water them at all.
Your handful of rain and sleet
is useless to you and,
I think the chance that we would meet
doesn’t matter much to stand.
Music City Blues (Moonlight Lady)
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Re: Music City Blues (Moonlight Lady)
I actually would love to hear this; it has an elegant flow, a story of two to tell and for some people to relate as well. Time changes us, and I think we'll sing a different song each time.
Much enjoyed!
Sash
Much enjoyed!
Sash
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Re: Music City Blues (Moonlight Lady)
mmm takes be back to my moonlight lady , so sweet , warm , and so sad and so true , loved it :)
You Rock My World !
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Re: Music City Blues (Moonlight Lady)
Hey,
I have just read your work.
Nice flowing, rhythmic construction.
Good work,
until...
I have just read your work.
Nice flowing, rhythmic construction.
Good work,
until...
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"Conformity is the bane of all writers and poets-,
the deadliest of poisons to the dreamer."
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"-- from my pain, for the pleasure of others."
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