Idyll

[created2write]

Engage me, or better yet, let me engage you
in the outrageous ventures of my mind
come share my soft if hard is your way, let
me sway and swirl you gently

Or if you care to explore; I implore you look
southward with me, can you see what I see?
it’s a honey suckle tree, with bees all abuzz
making honey to mix with pleasure

Smile I’ll do the rest and test your theory of
pessimism with my rainbow wares- I come in
a pair of shes, changing by degrees as the
breeze warrants

I’m only ever heard as a haunting lyric played
on the flute of ancients, a faint but steady
rhythm in the blood that begs to differ
for the sake of knowing

Let me engage you, or you might do the honors
if you wish, as kisses are born of do overs and
shared sunrises that break the dawn
all too soon

©2012

[.Nameless.]

A very nice piece, even if it was a bit profound, as djk said.

[created2write]

You have a profound writing style, and this piece truly delivers!

I am honored by your response. Thank you so much. Peace, V

[created2write]

A very nice piece, even if it was a bit profound, as djk said.

I am glad you enjoyed and thank you for sharing, I appreciate. Peace

[created2write]

I really enjoyed this poem, especially how the imagery builds with each stanza. my favorite line is "I come in
a pair of shes, changing by degrees as the breeze warrants" Great job.

Welcome to the Sanctuary and thank you for your kind words. Peace

[matches]

Hey C2W,

A note to let you know I been here to feast --, and I will return.


until...

[chowzrus]

C2W (Vicki?) - Girl, I love it when you knock on my heart like that - makes me miss Love so much -
Thanks for stirring this heart of mine - hope some of my work might do the same for you -
Love, Bill

[newlight]

made me wish i was in love, xx emma

[playerfrost]

that was awesome, i really can't think of anything that i would do to make it better, the imagery was great and word choice was really good, just a great poem.
"Smile I’ll do the rest and test your theory of
pessimism with my rainbow wares- I come in
a pair of shes, changing by degrees as the
breeze warrants"
I really liked this stanza the best, just very witty and great choice of words.

[everhopeful]

You had me at "Engage me, or better yet, let me engage you"!
I love it when the playful, seductive C2W side comes out to play, it's a special experience for this reader, and I sense that there is a side to this poem which is made to entice and brighten the day with the superb imagery, which is always closely linked to emotion and seeing new perspective in the world.
Another poem from you which makes me smile from ear to ear.

[created2write]

Hey C2W,

A note to let you know I been here to feast --, and I will return.


until...

Greg...don't keep me waiting, until...

[created2write]

Bill, thank you for such a beautiful smile. Makes my heart sing. Peace, V

Newlight, thank you much.

Playerfrost, thank you and welcome to the sanctuary. Looking forward. peace

[created2write]

You had me at "Engage me, or better yet, let me engage you"!
I love it when the playful, seductive C2W side comes out to play, it's a special experience for this reader, and I sense that there is a side to this poem which is made to entice and brighten the day with the superb imagery, which is always closely linked to emotion and seeing new perspective in the world.
Another poem from you which makes me smile from ear to ear.

Mick thank you so much, and I hope you know I am always honored all over again by your taking the time to share and respond with such feeling to my work. I'm feeling playful, who knows...

You make my day. Much love, V

[trell11]

Very subductive yet lyrical. I like how you go back and forth trying to see who wants to be the initiate. nice writing.

[Coapachy]

Hi my friend. You are such a naughty girl....and I LOVE it! The sensual imagery has me melted, I was going to say melting, but I have already liquidised! As ever, you hold words and flow with such precision and seduction, it feels, like always, such an honour to read you. So bloody sexy may I add! Brilliant.

Dave

[created2write]

Very subductive yet lyrical. I like how you go back and forth trying to see who wants to be the initiate. nice writing.

Thank you Trell glad you enjoyed, and welcome to the sanctuary.

[created2write]

Hi my friend. You are such a naughty girl....and I LOVE it! The sensual imagery has me melted, I was going to say melting, but I have already liquidised! As ever, you hold words and flow with such precision and seduction, it feels, like always, such an honour to read you. So bloody sexy may I add! Brilliant.

Dave

Liquidised huh? I like that Dave. Such a flattering response, and a great way to start my day. I am honored that you do read me and more that you enjoy. Thanks you and much love, V

[ladymaybebaby]

Instead of you had me at hello, you had me at " Engage me. " That was one beautiful piece! Such rich language, so descriptive, a beautiful write. I will be on the lookout for your posts! Can't wait to read more. Thank you honestly for sharing this gem! -LMB xoxo

[matches]

Hey C2W,

'forever' like the Dawn,
is always too soon in its arrival;
when all we are left with
are the midnight sighs,
and memories of Passions kiss.

Excellent work here. excellent work indeed.


until...

[created2write]

Hey C2W,

'forever' like the Dawn,
is always too soon in its arrival;
when all we are left with
are the midnight sighs,
and memories of Passions kiss.

Excellent work here. excellent work indeed.


until...

I love it, I love it!