unborn

[Budhound]

Perfect diction on the choice of words. Well done my friend.

[everhopeful]

A poem which is almost impossible to comment - although obviously a delicate subject matter, that alone isn't why it's such a heart-rending read, it is the poetic quality which makes it so. A precise scene, a gentle tone, and something to stir the emotion of any reader.
Congratulations on your deserved spotlight.