Reverie not Revelry

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Reverie not Revelry

Post by Jahaliel » April 25th, 2012, 8:38 am

I get frustrated at those among us
Who see a day of remembrance
As glorification, would that we had no need to march!
That there had never been a war, then more!

Those who call for the abolishment
Of ANZAC day cannot have been
To the hallowed shores of Gallipoli
Or to the dawn services where youth stand guard

The hundreds, thousands of people gathered
Whose lips move in silent prayer are not
Praying for another war, for more fallen heroes
They want only to remember those who died

And the marchers, the veterans with lines
So straight though many walk with canes
As pipes and bands play tunes of ages past
"The Road to Gundegai", "Long Way to Tipperary"

All showing respect (not anything else) so shut the hell up
Get off your couch and stand up for a minute of silence
Then go back to complaining on the radio
Mindless of the men who died so you could do so

(listening to talkback radio and some idiot wanted ANZAC day abolished because it glorifies war... It set me off a tad :blush: )


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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by Treasure_Hunter » April 25th, 2012, 10:17 am

Yeah, I feel frustrated too when our soldiers aren't given the respect and thanks they deserve. Good work!


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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by everhopeful » April 25th, 2012, 10:33 am

I can totally understand the provocation behind this one, I think it's massively misguided for someone to believe any act of rememberance is anything other than appreciation for sacrifice, and it couldn't be further from glorifying war.
Admirably you kept a lid on your anger until the final stanza, and confronted them with the truth.



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Post by ladylilith » May 3rd, 2012, 1:40 pm

The motivation spurring this one on is something I can relate and reflect on. I'll not start harping on too much else you'll never shut me up.. But some people should take a leaf out of my book and do just that and hush themselves on such days.. What Mick says is exactly right, 'an appreciation of sacrifice'. I love the impact of the last stanza, real effective writing Jah.

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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by inflames » May 21st, 2012, 7:11 pm

A lot of people feel the same way about Remembrance Day here. Which, I guess, as a Commonwealth Country, Australia has as well. They feel that as the wars were not "good wars" we shouldn't celebrate the actions of those men... because they were only following through on the evil actions of their government. Sigh. Its a confusing situation, but I don't agree we should stop remembering those men on those days...

Anyway, good poem here, Jah. It is very well expressed. Nicely done.


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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by moe » May 31st, 2012, 5:45 pm

Anyone that has been to war even if they were only in one action knows the horror, the waste and futility of it. Why do I say futility? It is true that great and noble causes have been won and it is just as true that great and noble causes have been loss.
The "cause" for which people, men, women and children die is noble to them but evil to those that kill them.
Warfare had always been since Og first coveted the "sparking stone" the Gog found and used to start a fire with. Yes I totally agree with Jah's view these warriors who gave their all should be honored and remembered.
But as Ashley Wilkes said in the novel "Gone With The Wind---- "when the wars were over, no one remembered what they were about."---- The cause may be lost in the dim shadows of faintly remembered history but those that fought them should always be remembered.



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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by Jovel320 » August 29th, 2014, 5:45 am

Way to voice what we all think of the talking heads and mindless pin heads out there. There are so many confused guano heads out there that it is scary. The worst part of all this is that some of these mutants actually own heavy weapons.If we sit down and think about this it will drive you to become a shut in.
Good write and add me to the ranks of your rant!!!
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Re: Reverie not Revelry

Post by rupertpupkin » June 26th, 2019, 5:02 pm

Great write. Every word in this is so honest and true. Loved it. Well done on the spotlight.


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