The Night That Jesus Called.

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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by dornicks » September 22nd, 2013, 4:09 pm

My thanks to you all for your thoughts and your words. They mean a lot to me,

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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by Larsen M. Callirhoe » October 1st, 2013, 10:28 pm

Sorry for your loss. A very beautifully inked recollection of those last moments of your mother's life essence fading into the great unknown. Sad and your words touched my heartstrings. I believe she is in a better place because that is what we all hope for.

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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by rupertpupkin » January 12th, 2015, 9:53 am

What a lovely poem. Wonderful rhyming, pace, structure and sentiments. Well done on a most deserving spotlight.


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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by Dew » January 13th, 2015, 6:41 am

...and congrats on the spotlight! - dew



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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by tangerinepie » January 13th, 2015, 1:00 pm

Vinny..so pleased to see this spotlighted.I can only imagine what a wonderful lady she was.The writing is eloquent and touching..Tangie..


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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by Mizzy » January 17th, 2015, 6:47 am

A special tribute to a very special lady.....
Written straight from the heart of a saddened
son who is grateful for the graces he received
from her.

God rest her !

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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by everhopeful » January 17th, 2015, 10:48 am

This is one of those pieces where the end product is worth even more than the sum of all parts. Most appropriately, bearing in mind the content, this is written in a relatively understated way with a gentle touch that only accentuates the message.
A wonderful tribute and a worthy spotlight, congratulations.



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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by riversidepoet » January 17th, 2015, 3:31 pm

Words from a beautiful heart, my mind went back to the day that my mom Jesus called, thank God for loving mothers.



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Re: The Night That Jesus Called.

Post by RiverRose » January 18th, 2015, 12:35 am

Congrats on the Spotlight - this is so beautiful. I'm glad I caught this one before the day was over and it's added to the archives. Thank you for this.



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