An archive containing past featured spotlight works, what we consider, some of the best works on TPS. Feel free to leave comments.
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mangodog - Elite Member
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by mangodog » February 18th, 2015, 5:09 pm
Ah, the old kitchen floor needed a better cleaning, from the
wild night that caused this!
drew
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albatoss - Regular Member
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by albatoss » February 22nd, 2015, 9:59 am
Been there done that! Should have swept better, I suppose.
When there is nothing left to burn, you have to set yourself on fire. -Stars
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karrie - Elite Member
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by karrie » February 23rd, 2015, 9:01 am
This made me think of angry fights, picking up pieces, of sweeping things under the rug. My mind wandered....
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ObsidianMule - Elite Member
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by ObsidianMule » February 23rd, 2015, 9:41 am
You're on to something, karrie
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Jim - Elite Member
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by Jim » February 23rd, 2015, 7:00 pm
A painful reminder - third line is loaded with
Possibilities
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godsplat - Moderator
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by godsplat » February 24th, 2015, 2:47 am
Son of a %#$&*, I hate it when that happens!
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Windsend
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by Windsend » February 27th, 2015, 3:23 am
Great poems invoke an effect. This one does just that. I want to cringe as I think of the issue at hand.
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Appleofmyeye - Regular Member
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by Appleofmyeye » February 28th, 2015, 9:59 pm
Engrossing read. Hope the cut was not too deep!
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iSurrender
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by iSurrender » March 14th, 2015, 3:37 pm
Stuck in the past
with a piece of glass
Ouch
Nice sharp ku
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Jim - Elite Member
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by Jim » May 18th, 2015, 1:02 pm
Alright OM
You done me proud haiku brother
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AoR - Regular Member
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by AoR » May 18th, 2015, 6:29 pm
I love the stories that come to mind with this. And yikes, I know what that feels like... It sounds like a lot of pain and obscenities and feels like a sudden jerk of death. Lol. I like the title, it seems to evoke a greater deeper curiosity and story. Nicely penned! Congrats on the Spotlight!
The one who isn't able to acknowledge his own self, will eventually fail.
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ObsidianMule - Elite Member
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by ObsidianMule » May 18th, 2015, 7:29 pm
I share my humble gratitude.
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BarryC - Regular Member
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by BarryC » May 21st, 2015, 12:26 pm
superb example of a difficult form