An archive containing past featured spotlight works, what we consider, some of the best works on TPS. Feel free to leave comments.
-
mikecaalaska - Regular Member
- Posts:244
- Joined:January 25th, 2015, 10:10 am
- Location:Alaska and northern Michigan
Early Sonoran Desert Morning
Post
by mikecaalaska » April 14th, 2015, 9:16 am
Droning noise of traffic now gone
Utter silence filling the desert air
It is 5 AM with a starry sky
Natures neon lights flicker brightly
Crescent moon moving slowly overhead.
In the courtyard the fireplace glows
Yellow, orange and blue glowing flames
Dancing gently with the morning breeze
Cactus at rest with eyes closed
Eyes to soon open with yellow flowers- meet the morning light.
Nature slowly pulls her shroud over the stars
Sky now turning to a bluish grey
Silhouettes of palo verde dance with the soft breeze
Branches traveling back and forth - adventuring
Deeply rooted into the ground, Your trunk stands firm.
Blue grey sky slowly absorbed with reds and oranges
Dawn now creates a morning sky.
Palo verde branches in full yellow bloom - dance on
Morning soft sounds now drift through the air
Gambel’s quail , cactus wren and the sound of a train miles away.
6 AM - sun slowly rises over the mountains to the East
Morning silhouettes now venturing away
Crescent moon moved on - back again tomorrow
Plants now putting on their day face
Colors, sounds and a breeze return- a Sonoran desert morning.
The sun is in our heart,
the moon is in our soul,
each day may change,
am just hoping to be here,for awhile,
for each sunrise and sunset.
-
Jerryk
- Elite Member
- Posts:3443
- Joined:October 28th, 2014, 8:45 pm
- Location:Arizona
-
Contact:
Post
by Jerryk » April 14th, 2015, 9:34 am
Beautifully done, Mike;
as you know, I'm an early riser and enjoy the desert outdoors at this time of the day. Unfortunately, this spring brought loads of pollen like never before. Antihistamines have become the numero uno seller at Walmart and pharmacies. Enjoyed your excellent lines throughout a well-written pastoral poem. Enjoyed,
Jerry
~verses from an old-fashioned bard; no ambiguities intended~
JerryK aka Alishonak, Snowbells, et al.
-
mikecaalaska - Regular Member
- Posts:244
- Joined:January 25th, 2015, 10:10 am
- Location:Alaska and northern Michigan
Post
by mikecaalaska » April 14th, 2015, 9:55 am
Thanks Jerry. I am south of Tucson for a couple of days away the coachella valley. I can understand the pollen well. Here everything in bloom - the ride over yesterday was creosote, palo verde and other desert plants in full bloom - a lot in the air.
Mike
The sun is in our heart,
the moon is in our soul,
each day may change,
am just hoping to be here,for awhile,
for each sunrise and sunset.
-
karrie - Elite Member
- Posts:3627
- Joined:April 17th, 2012, 12:21 am
- Location:Deep in the heart of Texas
Post
by karrie » April 14th, 2015, 5:24 pm
This is just so wonderful and it brought back to me lovely memories of living in the desert outside of Phoenix. I lived in a tipi and I would wake up and watch the sun rise and it was breathtaking! Really enjoyed this!
-
DreamerSeeker
- Regular Member
- Posts:807
- Joined:October 25th, 2013, 9:39 pm
- Location:Pennsylvania, U.S.A
Post
by DreamerSeeker » April 14th, 2015, 6:38 pm
Awesome poem and awesome imagery, keep on writing! :)
All of my poems are copyright from 2012-2021. No part of my poems is to be copied without my permission. Thank you!
-
Hope - Regular Member
- Posts:146
- Joined:September 28th, 2013, 8:50 pm
Post
by Hope » April 27th, 2015, 7:47 pm
You're an artist with words what a lovely painting of the desert.Once again I feel I shared the experience
-
ramfire - Elite Member
- Posts:1222
- Joined:May 28th, 2014, 11:56 am
Post
by ramfire » April 29th, 2015, 12:38 pm
You paint a wonderful word picture of an early morning on the desert. I felt I was with you as the day came on.
-
riversidepoet - Elite Member
- Posts:2531
- Joined:January 15th, 2015, 4:30 pm
- Location:Kentucky
Post
by riversidepoet » April 29th, 2015, 2:26 pm
Oh, how I loved this, what a beautiful way you described this beautiful morning, I felt I was there or at least I wish I were, it is a day the Lord has made, thanks for sharing and rejoice in it, may God bless
-
tangerinepie
- Elite Member
- Posts:4459
- Joined:April 18th, 2012, 10:42 pm
- Location:The North Shore
Post
by tangerinepie » May 6th, 2015, 12:04 pm
This was breathtaking in it's scope.So amazing to read about another part of the world and experience it through your eyes.A truly wonderful write..Tangie..
-
mikecaalaska - Regular Member
- Posts:244
- Joined:January 25th, 2015, 10:10 am
- Location:Alaska and northern Michigan
Post
by mikecaalaska » May 7th, 2015, 7:18 pm
Many thanks Tangie and all - enjoy my desert writings. A unique place during any part of the year. winters with an occasional rain fall - the scent in the air, summers - dry and hot yet life lives on - ahh the movement of night creatures. Thanks again.
Mike
The sun is in our heart,
the moon is in our soul,
each day may change,
am just hoping to be here,for awhile,
for each sunrise and sunset.
-
Liquid Bear - Elite Member
- Posts:2290
- Joined:May 13th, 2014, 9:14 am
Post
by Liquid Bear » May 8th, 2015, 7:26 am
This poem felt almost like a silent documentary, I could totally picture the scenery in my mind. Peaceful and contemplative.
Bear
"
I cry out for magic/I feel it dancing in the light/It was cold/Lost my hold/To the shadows of the night" (Ronnie James Dio)
-
mikecaalaska - Regular Member
- Posts:244
- Joined:January 25th, 2015, 10:10 am
- Location:Alaska and northern Michigan
Post
by mikecaalaska » May 11th, 2015, 9:10 am
May thanks Bear, there is a time for peace to be there - too many days of noose and the world surrounding us.
Mike
The sun is in our heart,
the moon is in our soul,
each day may change,
am just hoping to be here,for awhile,
for each sunrise and sunset.