Daughters of Cain... (Shakespearean Sonnet) Mature

[Stardust]

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Adroitly wielding my emotions dear,
I sit upon the diadems of time.
To, now, discover virgin treasure reared,
My flesh defends her naked breasts to mine.
A Seraphim will soar from wicked ash
To tempt the savage greed in mortal man.
What chaste devotion will devour wrath;
Soul born to light, machined for Heaven's plan?
Make her a god, beholden to my blood,
Bedecked and fanged with womb; sword forged from gold!
My Angel has devoted, as she should,
A cistern for my seed like legends old.
Her flesh, her precious flesh, is Cain's to burn,
Thus Angel's love is Heaven when returned.



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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7TYe4pqq_c

[dwells]

You definitely aced this one Stardust, and I'm going back for another read after I finish this comment. A consummate characterization, and the girls from the land of Nod are a caution! Cheers for this beauty! - Dan

[AoR]

Gorgeous and well-penned. Great pacing throughout as well. Indeed, worthy of a Spotlight. Passionate and such pulsing energy and visuals, very nicely done! You even wrote it in a sonnet form. Smooth, sleek and delightful! Congrats! :)

[BarryC]

brilliant piece-deserves the spotlight