As a Rainbow

[CarolynKleefeld]

As a Rainbow

As a rainbow,
you color my clouds.

Draped in them,
you reach
the blueness of skies.

And then you vanish–
dissolving into memory
and vagabond mist.

Yet the mountain
of your impact stays,
soaring with the wings
of paradox and dream.

And the imagination’s secrets
glow with the incandescence
of roses in bloom.

[bumblebee]

this is really lovely and so visual as well (:

[Dew]

I loved the mixed images associated with elevation...and the juxtaposition of fleeting and lasting ideas. You tied it all together in a lovely piece! so short but so much packed inside! This was a delightful peek into love CK! Adored it! - dew

[robema1]

As it is i see dreams evolving to become true.

Cheers!

[CarolynKleefeld]

Thank you so very much Bumblebee, Hobo Elite, Dew, and Robema-- I'm most grateful for your kind, thoughtful, and supportive words!

[Lonnie]

Now this is poetry!

Something one can sink one's teeth into and savor the sweetness of each line! Very nicely written!

[karrie]

Oh this is so lovely! Congrats on the spotlight!

[SabyCs]

First of all,Congratulations on the spotlight.
Its such a picturesque&adorable piece of work.
Really nice.

[Ladywildalice]

Carolyn, my friend, a most heartfelt congratulations on the Spotlight for this well deserving, most tender write. I thoroughly enjoyed the trip your words carried be forward on, and, now that I have had a respite from the cares of my day, I will say thank you, a second congrats, and be off.

[CarolynKleefeld]

Now this is poetry!
Something one can sink one's teeth into and savor the sweetness of each line! Very nicely written!

Thank you so very much for these thoughtful words!

[CarolynKleefeld]

Oh this is so lovely! Congrats on the spotlight!

Thank you very much, Karrie!

[CarolynKleefeld]

First of all,Congratulations on the spotlight.
Its such a picturesque&adorable piece of work.
Really nice.

Thank you very much!

[CarolynKleefeld]

Carolyn, my friend, a most heartfelt congratulations on the Spotlight for this well deserving, most tender write. I thoroughly enjoyed the trip your words carried be forward on, and, now that I have had a respite from the cares of my day, I will say thank you, a second congrats, and be off.

Thank you so very much for your kind and thoughtful words, Sue.

[inflames]

The last stanza is absolutely lovely. Congrats on your spotlight.

[Josie]

This was an unusual poem for me that reflected on the deep sadness of having to say goodbye to a lady that touched the lives of many children with the free gifts of her time, talents, and love. She was the rainbow and 'the mountain of her impact lingers. That is where your words took me. Congratulations on the TPS Spotlight.

[shays1]

This read felt dream-like soft in satin sheets. Those dreams from which you wish you hadn't been awoken. Very nicely written.

[CarolynKleefeld]

Thank you so very much to everyone for the thoughtful and supportive words; I'm most appreciative for these kind and meaningful comments.