I cook them down,
And throw them hard, against the wall.
If they stick, I post them all.
Spaghetti Words
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Wes Corona
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I cook them down,
And throw them hard, against the wall.
If they stick, I post them all.
,, Every day, life is a test. Pass this test, and you get another day.
Go ask Alice, I think she'll know.
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TripleP
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Re: Spaghetti Words
Boy, if everybody would wait until their 'words' were done, before they 'posted them', then there would be a lot less emotional pain in this world. Great, great simile.
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Wes Corona
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Re: Spaghetti Words
Follow me, and I'll help you laugh, or, perhaps you will depose a bit of my prose.
,, Every day, life is a test. Pass this test, and you get another day.
Go ask Alice, I think she'll know.
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dornicks
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Re: Spaghetti Words
I enjoyed the comical aspect of your poem, but taken seriously, I agree with you wholeheartedly. Nicely written and thank you for sharing this,
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robema1
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JASON
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Re: Spaghetti Words
Good to know you think about each word before putting them down on the page...
congratulations on the spotlight
congratulations on the spotlight
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Riordan
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Re: Spaghetti Words
I like the effiency and tastefulness of this pasta poem.
Great job and congrats on the spotlight!
Great job and congrats on the spotlight!
