By inconstant constants
We're blessed
We're cursed
Stars constantly shine
Then implode
Reverse
Blackest of holes,
Lurking, poised,
Snuffing out neighbors,
Light is destroyed.
Beating of hearts
Unseen
Unfelt
Pulsating strength
Unblemished
Can melt
Life-giving cadence,
Unnoticed 'til gone,
Can weaken, erratic,
Erasing a song.
Change is the rule
Birth
Decay
Unbounded ecstasy
Wizened
Dismayed
Seems under our curse
Pulsates a Light,
Providentially pulling
Our soul through the night.
Constants
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Re: Constants
Phillip: Very thought provoking!!! Without contrast there is no life! However, Ralph Waldo Emerson put an interesting spin on it all when he wrote that in every loss there is gain and in every gain there is a loss! I like to live my life looking for the gold and everybody has some. You really got me thinking with this one. Thanks so very much for sharing. anthony
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Re: Constants
Change is the only true constant. I like the idea and presentation of light and sound and movement in flux. A strong close with the constant of the force of Providence.
Thanks much for sharing.
Mirthy
Thanks much for sharing.
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Re: Constants
First off I loved the rhyming that you had here, ok I admit I'm a sucker for a good rhyme and yours were just awesome. Anyway back on the actual content which was also amazing I might add. There is always dark where there is light, loss where there is gain it is a constant balance. Thanks for sharing
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Re: Constants
What struck me most is that you have seemed to manage to add the sounds and the senses. Life is an ever changing Journey, within and without...
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