Hello there;
there is something so dreary about December; only the Christmas season offers us humans a glimmer of hope, but for the forest creatures December is the onset of lean times. I like the lines where the sparrow rests upon the willow branch. Btw, as a wild bird rehabilitator I can tell you that roughly one third of the bird population dies off during those harsh winter months. A fine write, ncleroy. Much liked,
Jerry
In the Forest
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Re: In the Forest
Skillfully and creatively composed descriptions, with compelling imagery; much enjoyed.
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Re: In the Forest
This has a musical quality to it with wonderful movement...
A fine display of writing.
A fine display of writing.
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