World Theatre

[Ona Sabela]

The rippling shadows of rustling leaves
dance,
pirouetting across the
porch that is their stage.
Wind sighs a swelling accompaniment
to the performance,
while the jeering
of the uncultured crows
is unable to diminish the grace
of the gently weaving performers.

[Jackthejoker7]

Good write very deep

[moe]

I liked the wording and the mind picture you have created here Well Done!

[Ona Sabela]

Thank you, Jackthejoker7.

It's good to see you again, moe.
Thanks for stopping by! :D

[Michaelwg3]

Uncultured crows? I resemble that! Elegant, swirly words dance across the screen. Enjoyed your write.

Michael

[Ona Sabela]

Thanks, Michael, although you seem more like a refined raven to me!

[CarolynKleefeld]

Imaginative imagery, delightfully and elegantly composed; much enjoyed.

[tangerinepie]

An enjoyable read, picturesque, and those ding dong crows always having to chime in a fact of life. But adding those two lines added some whimsy to this pretty poem..Tangie..

[Ona Sabela]

Thank you, Carolyn, Tangie!
Your comments mean a lot to me.

[jim_moonan]

Nice small stage of the grandeur of the on-going performance of the natural world - complete with the heckling crows : )

[riversidepoet]

I really like this, others see the wind blowing the trees, but a special heart sees them dancing and watches intently, thanks for sharing, may God bless

[Ona Sabela]

Thank you, riversidepoet!
I'm glad you liked it.