From the bus window pane

[jainrohit]

Silence of sparse night skies
Spilling down into
abandoned fields.

[ObsidianMule]

This one resonates with me deeply. I really like the way you captured the passage of time in a singular scene.

[nightseas]

Beautiful way of capturing a scene!

[Jim]

one of those moments when you feel some of what we call eternity
Masterful my friend
Many
Bows

[davidifox]

Jainrohit,
I like this haiku. The imagery almost brings me into those fields
~davidifox

[robema1]

sort of what a mirror is.

[unsinkmolly]

nice, especially like the use of sparse and the s repetition. i see the picture. abandoned cuz it is night or abandoned during day too I am left wondering? best, molly

[kryptoean]

It's like the life cycle of a person, from wonder looking at the skies, all the way to abandonment in old age, with nobody to see you disappear (die). Life in a nutshell!

[oursummertrees]

Fantastic imagery - a moment and a feeling captured in time in so few words. Congratulations on the spotlight!

-A.

[Jim]

I'm all too happy to re-visit this piece here my friend.
Well deserved

[Josie]

Brevity of words add depth to the moment. Congratulations on the TPS spotlight.

[Liquid Bear]

Congratulations, well deserved spotlight. Your poems instantly paints a picture in the reader's mind.

Bear

[Leo]

Three short lines an yet i am instantly catapulted into a seat on anyone of the numerous bus rides home i have been on, could be from work or a night out but on all lost in the window gripped by the scenes as the flash through your life.
very nice...