A part of life

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stefaith
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A part of life

Post by stefaith » January 9th, 2014, 10:39 pm

It's complicated
It's indecipherable
It's beyond explanation
It's unreadable
The art of understanding is an endless process
Whereby one can hold and loss easily
Hold on tight and be the responsible one where everyone adores
Let it go and be childish for once where everyone despises
Can't I, for once, just let it all go and flow freely?
Irrationality can be such a luxury
Where no one seems to understand but putting blames blindly
Contradicting as it may seems
The is just part of life...



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Re: A part of life

Post by flux » January 10th, 2014, 9:07 am

If you can't let go and make no sense in poetry then where can you? Lots of people do it, TPS is full of poets that hardly make sense but it's all fun.


Make fellow poets happy and comment on their poems.



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Re: A part of life

Post by dwells » January 10th, 2014, 9:16 pm

Stefaith - holding on is so hard when so easy to let go perhaps, and you pose a timeless question, cheers!


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Re: A part of life

Post by IronHeart » October 29th, 2016, 4:50 pm

It is difficult, isn't it? Either the pain of fitting into the expected boxes of society or the pain of facing what comes when you break those expectations.. the question that comes to mind is "what kind of pain would I rather have?"


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Re: A part of life

Post by rupertpupkin » May 3rd, 2021, 10:45 am

Its hard just to be yourself in this demanding world. Solid piece of writing and well deserved of a spotlight.


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